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30分帮帮忙检查英语文章看咯这篇有语法错误么,帮我改出来,谁改对了就给30分,不食言Help?HappyDoyouhearanidiom?Giveonearose,andyouhandsaresweet-smelling!Fromthis,Iwriteastory!Pleaselisten:Oneday,Igototh
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30分帮帮忙检查英语文章

看咯这篇有语法错误么,帮我改出来,谁改对了就给30分,不食言

Help?Happy

Doyouhearanidiom?Giveonearose,andyouhandsaresweet-smelling!

Fromthis,Iwriteastory!Pleaselisten:

Oneday,IgototheforestandIwantplayinthere.Imeetadog.What’syourname?Iask.Lucky!Wow,anicename.Whydoesanybodycallyoulucky?Aha,letmetakeastorytoyou.

Twoyearsago,I’monlyoneyearsold.AndIhaveabadsick.Manydoctorssay:maybeyou’lldie,orhavethesickeverytime.Iknowthis.Iusuallycry.Ihavenohappytime.Oneday,ahelpfulsheepdoctortellsme:Icanhelpyou.Iknow,manydoctorshaveamagicmedicine,buttheydon’twantgiveitforotheranimals.Ihavea,too.IwantgiveyouandIcanmakeyoubetter.Relay?Yes!Spendtwomonthago,I’mbetteragain.SoIhaveanewname:Lucky.Ithankheralot.Andsheonlysays:maybeImustdoit,becauseI’madoctor.I’mveryhappy.

Manyanimalsknowthisthing,andtheycallthedoctorkindAngel!

Giveonearose,andyouhandsaresweet-smelling!Letgivehelpandlovetoeveryone!

段静回答:
  题目应该是名词吧!   Happiness   Iwroteastory.   pleaselisten与其不是很好,建议换为:hereisthestory.   既然用到了多种饮用,间接的直接的,希望能够分得更明确些.要么都加上引号,要么都指明人称.   havethesick搭配错误,应该是desease   usuallycry在这里表达错误,应该是often   后面给药有一句是ihavea,too.冠词用错了,再加上连接词应该是and(well)ihaveone,too.   relay?拼写错误   spendtwomonthago,iambetteragain.可换为:itcostmetwomonthstorecovermyself.   倒数第二段,knowthisthing,thing多余,删掉.   看文章,知道你写得也不容易.   就这样了,你在顺一顺语句就好了.
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