30分帮帮忙检查英语文章
看咯这篇有语法错误么,帮我改出来,谁改对了就给30分,不食言
Help?Happy
Doyouhearanidiom?Giveonearose,andyouhandsaresweet-smelling!
Fromthis,Iwriteastory!Pleaselisten:
Oneday,IgototheforestandIwantplayinthere.Imeetadog.What’syourname?Iask.Lucky!Wow,anicename.Whydoesanybodycallyoulucky?Aha,letmetakeastorytoyou.
Twoyearsago,I’monlyoneyearsold.AndIhaveabadsick.Manydoctorssay:maybeyou’lldie,orhavethesickeverytime.Iknowthis.Iusuallycry.Ihavenohappytime.Oneday,ahelpfulsheepdoctortellsme:Icanhelpyou.Iknow,manydoctorshaveamagicmedicine,buttheydon’twantgiveitforotheranimals.Ihavea,too.IwantgiveyouandIcanmakeyoubetter.Relay?Yes!Spendtwomonthago,I’mbetteragain.SoIhaveanewname:Lucky.Ithankheralot.Andsheonlysays:maybeImustdoit,becauseI’madoctor.I’mveryhappy.
Manyanimalsknowthisthing,andtheycallthedoctorkindAngel!
Giveonearose,andyouhandsaresweet-smelling!Letgivehelpandlovetoeveryone!
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