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DearCharles:

IknowyouareworriedaboutTommythathehadstolentheshopmorethanonce.Youtoldyourparentsthismatter,buttheyaskyounottogetinvolved,soyoudon’tknowhowtodo.

Whenreceivingyourletter,IfeelsorrytoknowthatyourfriendwasshopliftingandIamworryaboutyou,whetheryoucouldsolvethisproblemornot.

Personallyspeaking,I’mnotonyourparentsside.Idon’tthinktheycoulddoingnothinginthismatter,onthecontrary,theyshouldtalktoTommy’sparentssoastohelpTommyoftrouble.

Ihavesomeadviceforyou,andtheymaybehelpyoutodealwiththismatter.First,IthinkyoucantalkwithTommyafterschoolandaskhimwhyhedidthisthing.Second,ifTommydoesn’trealizehismistake,thenyoucantellyourteacherthisthing.Finally,youcanaskyourparentstocommunicatewithTommy’sparentsthismatter.IthinkTommywillbecomewellifwehelphimtogether.