求助批改英语作文(高中)
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Withthedevelopmentofthemodernsociety,whatwillourlifebelikeinfuture?Perhapswecanliveundertheseaandonthemoon.Peopledon’thavetogooutforshoppingorseeingadoctoranymore.Thankstotheinternetprovidinguswithconveneintlife.AndtherewillbemoreTVprogammersforpeopletochoose.Peoplecanalsobreakawayfromthetiringhouseworkwhichishelpedbyrobots.Thenwewillhavemoretimetodootherthings.Withthedevelopmentofagricutural,people’sdietswillbemuchhealthier.Advancedtechenologywillimproveourenviromentgreatly.Asforthespace,humanbeingsalsomakegreatachievements.
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