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呵呵,现写的应付考试.帮忙改一改哈ThepersonthatiadmireIfyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonintheworld,Ican`tansweryou.But,ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonthatIadmireinmyheart.Icanansweryouinaloudlyvoice.Itiswan
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呵呵,现写的应付考试.帮忙改一改哈

Thepersonthatiadmire

Ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersoninthe

world,Ican`tansweryou.But,ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonthatI

admireinmyheart.Icanansweryouinaloudlyvoice.Itiswanghao-atable

tennisathlete.

WangHaohasabraveheartandhehasthe

never-give-upattitude.HewonallofthechampionshipexcepttheOlympic

Games.WhenhejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2004,hewasbeatenby

Liuchengmin.WhenhejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2008,hewasbeatenbyMalin.When

hejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2012,hewasbeatenbyZhnagjike.Thougheveryone

isdisappointed,hedoesn`tfeelsadandwanttobebetter.

Itisworthforusto

studyitsnever-give-upattitude.Hisstorymadememoving.Ithinkhewilldothebestathleteintheworldandineveryone`sheart!

苏朋回答:
  loudly改成loudloudly是副词,不能修饰名词.只能用loud这个形容词来修饰voice.中间那部分,其实都没有错误,说法这样说也可以,所以不用改.最后三句Itisworthforustostudyitsnever-give-upattitude.worth...
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